Comments on: Chasing Rainbows

By: Erica13387

Erica13387 — Mon, 03 Dec 2007 19:56:42 +0000

That was the most poetic lyrics that I have ever sung to myself. I really enjoyed it. I give you my heart as a token of my gratitude. ERICA

By: ShaDow

ShaDow — Fri, 16 Nov 2007 18:00:51 +0000

so many people find insparation in your work… i just hope you continue so you can lighten my life a little more. it was awesome but did you ever find the rainbow that you talk about or is that the point of the poem, to exaggerate the effect that the search is far greater than the find?
- a fellow shadow lost in the blindness of the light

By: ticeygirl

ticeygirl — Wed, 14 Nov 2007 16:39:57 +0000

i luved it ! the audio is going to be great and i cant wait till it somes out! pleaz have it out soon! Raven ure such a good writer i wish i could be as talented to do people in my school dont understand the way i am amd no one gets me for me! well keep up the good work!

By: Storme

Storme — Mon, 05 Nov 2007 16:09:15 +0000

I get how most of you poetry and lyrics have your feelings woven into them. It makes me feel like I;m not insane when I right
Thanks for making everything seem a little less crazy

By: Bill

Bill — Thu, 29 Mar 2007 05:01:07 +0000

Under same skies we die
We go
God, we rage these days
I’m one for complaint
No saint’s told me how
to be
There are rainbows of knives
But we write our own lives

I am no reply to a frightened
little question in a mind bent
on more and more sad sackery

By: geLa

geLa — Mon, 29 Jan 2007 15:13:52 +0000

how sad.. =<

By: member

member — Mon, 22 Jan 2007 21:47:20 +0000

It explains soooo many peoples lives. And I definitely feel the rhythm. I love it!

By: Susan

Susan — Wed, 04 Oct 2006 21:40:03 +0000

I like this poem, but the “rainbow” makes this poem 10 times better for me, due to the fact that i have finally found the person i want to spend my life with, and she is female.

Other then that the poem is written very well, i enjoyed it.

By: Susan

Susan — Wed, 04 Oct 2006 21:40:02 +0000

I like this poem, but the “rainbow” makes this poem 10 times better for me, due to the fact that i have finally found the person i want to spend my life with, and she is female.

Other then that the poem is written very well, i enjoyed it.

By: cheyanne

cheyanne — Tue, 19 Sep 2006 15:08:27 +0000

i love this! its the story of my life…