Comments on: Electric Touch

By: Natasha

Natasha — Wed, 21 Mar 2007 00:31:35 +0000

i love this poem its realy touching it went straight to my heart.
thank you for writing this poem it tought me a lesson.
xx
Tarsh

By: Lily

Lily — Thu, 11 May 2006 22:50:19 +0000

adn when the morning comes and the sun shines out love will smoulder and die and the flames which once danced so wildly will fall to ashes in the morning breeze…
aww love is such a beautiful thing

By: Gabby

Gabby — Mon, 13 Mar 2006 20:59:29 +0000

Hello.. i found this site on a poetry paper.. and then i started reading and i just love every poem i have read so far. Especially this one.. it just jumped out at me. I was in a realationship with a guy and this poem reminded me of it. We were so in love at first and then it just became desires. But i just love your work and i love reading ur work. Thank you for being such a awesome poem and serious we need more of those. I love to write also and i just love ur poems.. thank you..

gabby sweet

By: karrah

karrah — Wed, 01 Mar 2006 05:47:41 +0000

whoever your girlfreind is shes really lucky.i love your poem.

-karrah

By: Jessica Ryann

Jessica Ryann — Sun, 22 Jan 2006 06:33:17 +0000

Do I know you ??????? Smiles ~ Thank you for the email to this Poem … Very nice !

Jess

By: Phoenix

Phoenix — Wed, 28 Dec 2005 05:57:53 +0000

That is absolutely amazing. It reminds me of how much I want to be in love.

By: sarah

sarah — Mon, 19 Dec 2005 03:25:59 +0000

incredible

By: Shelby

Shelby — Mon, 17 Oct 2005 19:04:30 +0000

Your poetry is helping me get through a lot of tough times. Right now things are not seeming to go my way with people who are close to me, and some of them they are. I really can relate to all of your poetry.

~Dark_Angel~

By: Kinkster

Kinkster — Fri, 30 Sep 2005 01:22:27 +0000

It sort of describes the way I felt the first time I met/kissed/fell in love with my FuckToy. Truly a touching poem. SUPERB.

By: Shelby

Shelby — Thu, 29 Sep 2005 20:04:40 +0000

Your poem relates alot to one of my ex-best friends who wants to go back out with this guy who's name is Nick. But he doesn't like her and she is mad at me because we like each other, but aren't going out. Anyway she is obssed with him and wants him to fall in love with her for a least a night when they are all alone.
Great poem.

~Want2Kill~