Comments on: Late-Night Diner

By: gatewolf

gatewolf — Sat, 13 Jan 2007 06:01:52 +0000

Awesome imagery! I felt like I was there with you. You have a wonderful gift. One question- how do you write when your muse is malfunctioning? When you have no ideas and the blank lines are taunting you?

By: jade

jade — Wed, 11 May 2005 21:48:14 +0000

this is a very cool poem..i can so relate to it…good job raven..jade*

By: suicidal_soul

suicidal_soul — Fri, 22 Apr 2005 17:32:06 +0000

i wish i had so much talent to express my emotion so clearly!

By: Ireth

Ireth — Thu, 07 Apr 2005 17:47:51 +0000

Your words penetrate my soul releasing smothered emotions held within so long. Good to know you're not alone in this plague. Mental anguish infects us all.

By: Shelly

Shelly — Sun, 13 Mar 2005 03:04:42 +0000

I disagree with enitharmon, there is a type of poetry called stream of conscious…and it is meant to be written literally…it is exactly what it says…a stream of your thoughts…to me, this is the best kind of poetry…I love your poetry Raven…keep up the wonderful work…
Shelly

By: Alain

Alain — Sat, 12 Mar 2005 13:59:53 +0000

i know your poem is more than the mythical pattern of a person who is isolated from the rest because he is meant to be alone by circumstances; seeks refuge in his aloneness and finds meaninglessness in life in place (such this inn, etc.) where he can think about the emptiness and miseries in life; more than this, i know…

By: Giovanni

Giovanni — Tue, 08 Mar 2005 23:36:37 +0000

I can feel the everlasting emptiness and compels me to think that I, Giovanni, will be in desolation. Great imagery.

"As ye sow, so shall ye reap."

By: Rohan

Rohan — Sat, 05 Mar 2005 00:50:20 +0000

great poem. It relates to me well. Its almost the same situation with me at this point in my life, as a crisis has occured. great work and I look forward to reading yet another incredible poem by you.

~Rohan~

By: Nadia

Nadia — Wed, 02 Mar 2005 01:11:29 +0000

as i have already told you, i love this poem.

By: Kitty

Kitty — Fri, 25 Feb 2005 21:43:06 +0000

i read all of your poems and i love them all. i hope you keep writing these poems as beautiful as the ones before them. Keep it up. ^-^ i do write some poetry myslef and at the moment i am makeing my vary own website if i do get the chance to get it set up i well give it to you to check out.

Kitty.