Comments on: Murder in the First

By: Michelle

Michelle — Mon, 12 Feb 2007 21:55:09 +0000

insane…
i agree with moogs

By: brandon peterson

brandon peterson — Wed, 11 Oct 2006 19:42:40 +0000

the arguement of religion shall go on forever. no matter how much looking into one does, the war remains the same.

By: Isis

Isis — Tue, 25 Oct 2005 02:36:38 +0000

wow, this story is sooooo (i’ve never used this word before) touching….

By: Arachne

Arachne — Thu, 17 Mar 2005 04:27:12 +0000

i like this, it has a bit of poetic justice to it. great job dude!
~Arachne

By: moogs

moogs — Thu, 04 Nov 2004 04:03:18 +0000

i love that the captor kills himself. he doesnt have to experience (earthly) persecution. he did wut he needed to do by getting revenge, but would have recieved no mercy from anyone (like the authorities)for the crime he commits. some may think that only a p*ssy would take the easy way out, but look at the heroic (yes heroic)statement he made before leaving this world. it makes death look so inviting and understanding, being the best or only exit. its a great plot too. i just love the ending because its so unethical and so seldomly used. this story is pleasingly shocking.

By: robyn

robyn — Thu, 08 Jul 2004 21:24:47 +0000

*cruel smirk* I like this

By: Lucy

Lucy — Sun, 16 May 2004 21:37:18 +0000

aha… I, personally, am only drawn to the subject of murder =)

By: Aimee

Aimee — Wed, 18 Feb 2004 00:22:17 +0000

I think the story and events that happend, including the muslims revenge were completely apropriate. It takes a good writer to go outside what people think is the norm and write controversial stories. Good Job.

By: Kolya

Kolya — Fri, 02 Jan 2004 06:00:32 +0000

I disagree with kayla. Everyone deserves that kind of pain just some more than others. Im not religious but i feel sorry for the guy who pushes me that far!!!!!!

By: kayla

kayla — Mon, 08 Dec 2003 22:51:47 +0000

omg that story is horrible its wrong nobody deserves that kind of pain