Comments on: Open Fire

By: tear drops

tear drops — Tue, 18 Dec 2007 20:40:53 +0000

hey i know i've done it once or twice

By: tear drops

tear drops — Tue, 18 Dec 2007 20:39:35 +0000

wow i think that poem hits home to alot of people. I also think that having to burn love letters is no way to cope with the inner pain you might be having. Hey know i've done it once or twice!!!

By: Lizard (bri)

Lizard (bri) — Mon, 01 Jan 2007 21:17:57 +0000

These poems are really awesome and heartfelt. If I need to get in touch with some feelings, I read these poems. "Open Fire" reminds me of this guy I like that is acting like he likes me but sometimes it seems he is just playing me.

By: donnie

donnie — Thu, 02 Feb 2006 22:14:14 +0000

i know how you feel keep up the good work.

By: Anna

Anna — Fri, 13 Jan 2006 20:35:09 +0000

that poem really made my cry i loved everything about it it really touched me ……these type of poems i really love that i can cry over that really touch me like that…..

By: Karoly Delacroix

Karoly Delacroix — Thu, 12 Jan 2006 21:12:24 +0000

I love all your poetry, but this one… is a world of its own. Your writing is vivid, beautiful and skilled. It touches the heart and something inside the reader that they can identify and love/admire it all the more. This one actually made me cry, even though justa few tears but hold it closer- I went through almost the same thing with my ex, felt the same way you described in the poem. A hollow ache and helpless desperation as you watch years of struggle and caring turn to ash and mist away… But the pain makes us human, let's us know we're alive, non? I look forward to reading more of your poetry, and feeling.

By: Lorna

Lorna — Fri, 23 Sep 2005 12:20:45 +0000

as i had a huge arguement with my boyfriend then made up i know how you feel, its horrible this poem almost made me cry. i would have looked stupid if i i did as im in school lol, but keep up the good work

By: sammy jo

sammy jo — Wed, 25 May 2005 21:45:47 +0000

This is a really good poem…..keep it up…..seriously we need more gothic poets….

By: windrider

windrider — Wed, 25 May 2005 18:35:01 +0000

such a heart-rending poem, the true tortures of lost love described.

By: ali bhutto

ali bhutto — Mon, 16 May 2005 02:41:47 +0000

that good