http://www.ravensrants.com/runaway-part-thirteen/ Gothic Poetry and More Fri, 25 Jul 2008 05:41:23 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.5.1 http://www.ravensrants.com/runaway-part-thirteen/#comment-7188 Ashley Tue, 08 Jun 2004 01:56:59 +0000 http://ravensrants.com/?p=491#comment-7188 wow...this is so good. Please come out with the conclusion soon! I really want to see what happens. Magnificant stroy...love it. wow…this is so good. Please come out with the conclusion soon! I really want to see what happens. Magnificant stroy…love it.

]]> http://www.ravensrants.com/runaway-part-thirteen/#comment-7189 Briana Thu, 01 Apr 2004 00:42:28 +0000 http://ravensrants.com/?p=491#comment-7189 This story is written in a very Suspenseful and exciting manner. I really do not like the content because the drug wars will always be brutal, unesserry, and unforgiving. However, I cant wait for the conclusion! This story is written in a very Suspenseful and exciting manner. I really do not like the content because the drug wars will always be brutal, unesserry, and unforgiving. However, I cant wait for the conclusion!

]]> http://www.ravensrants.com/runaway-part-thirteen/#comment-7190 asdlfj Mon, 08 Mar 2004 07:02:01 +0000 http://ravensrants.com/?p=491#comment-7190 omfg.. this is soo good.. ever thought of sending it to paramount, wb, or universal and makin it a movie.. it'd be really gooood. omfg.. this is soo good.. ever thought of sending it to paramount, wb, or universal and makin it a movie.. it’d be really gooood.

]]> http://www.ravensrants.com/runaway-part-thirteen/#comment-7191 Spanky Mon, 08 Mar 2004 03:28:32 +0000 http://ravensrants.com/?p=491#comment-7191 Man, i loved ur story. You make it sound so realistic but still able to keep it suspensful, i feel like i'm there watching the whole thing. I'm dieing to know what will happen next. Man, i loved ur story. You make it sound so realistic but still able to keep it suspensful, i feel like i’m there watching the whole thing. I’m dieing to know what will happen next.

]]> http://www.ravensrants.com/runaway-part-thirteen/#comment-7192 Tiff Mon, 08 Mar 2004 00:22:52 +0000 http://ravensrants.com/?p=491#comment-7192 wow. i love how your bringing the small detail and intertwining them into this plot. it keeps the story suspensfull, but with a touch of reality. wow. i love how your bringing the small detail and intertwining them into this plot. it keeps the story suspensfull, but with a touch of reality.

]]> http://www.ravensrants.com/runaway-part-thirteen/#comment-7193 Shana Fri, 20 Feb 2004 22:06:34 +0000 http://ravensrants.com/?p=491#comment-7193 I loved this part; it is very effective, and I can tell that you are a very good writer. Very believable too. I want to see what happens next! I loved this part; it is very effective, and I can tell that you are a very good writer. Very believable too. I want to see what happens next!

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