Comments on: Runaway: Part Twelve http://www.ravensrants.com/runaway-part-twelve/ Gothic Poetry and More Sun, 20 Mar 2011 01:50:09 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: The Forgotten One http://www.ravensrants.com/runaway-part-twelve/comment-page-1/#comment-7196 The Forgotten One Tue, 25 Jul 2006 03:12:50 +0000 http://ravensrants.com/?p=493#comment-7196 I love it,I can really relate. P.S. R u really talking to someone or r u writing that stuff????? just wanted to know!!!!! I love it,I can really relate.

P.S. R u really talking to someone or r u writing that stuff????? just wanted to know!!!!!

]]> By: Ravenvampire89 http://www.ravensrants.com/runaway-part-twelve/comment-page-1/#comment-7197 Ravenvampire89 Tue, 26 Apr 2005 19:09:14 +0000 http://ravensrants.com/?p=493#comment-7197 this was the most awesome chapter yet! keep them coming! this was the most awesome chapter yet! keep them coming!

]]> By: Poetic Refuge http://www.ravensrants.com/runaway-part-twelve/comment-page-1/#comment-7198 Poetic Refuge Mon, 09 Feb 2004 04:41:38 +0000 http://ravensrants.com/?p=493#comment-7198 WOW. This story has had it ups and downs but its really interesting. I cant wait for the rest of it. WOW. This story has had it ups and downs but its really interesting. I cant wait for the rest of it.

]]> By: Tom Tom http://www.ravensrants.com/runaway-part-twelve/comment-page-1/#comment-7199 Tom Tom Fri, 23 Jan 2004 08:18:03 +0000 http://ravensrants.com/?p=493#comment-7199 hey, it's finally moving on into a new part. i agree with shadow lander in that he is getting out of sticky situations to easily. i'm looking foward to some deep twists and turns and meeting some new characters. can't wait for the next one. keep it up. peace Tom Tom hey, it's finally moving on into a new part. i agree with shadow lander in that he is getting out of sticky situations to easily. i'm looking foward to some deep twists and turns and meeting some new characters. can't wait for the next one. keep it up. peace Tom Tom

]]> By: Shadow Lander http://www.ravensrants.com/runaway-part-twelve/comment-page-1/#comment-7200 Shadow Lander Mon, 12 Jan 2004 14:46:41 +0000 http://ravensrants.com/?p=493#comment-7200 well...the very first thing that i have to comment on is the part where you mentioned the kid getting drums for christmas...im sorry,but it's just that i play drums you see, so anything related to drum playing in the slighest ways catches my attention!anyways, try make the next part a bit harder and tougher to get through for Jake than the previous one's..im no expert, but it seems to me like he's been getting out of everything too easily..just had to comment on that too...anyways. carry on with the good work.. it's shweet man! well…the very first thing that i have to comment on is the part where you mentioned the kid getting drums for christmas…im sorry,but it's just that i play drums you see, so anything related to drum playing in the slighest ways catches my attention!anyways, try make the next part a bit harder and tougher to get through for Jake than the previous one's..im no expert, but it seems to me like he's been getting out of everything too easily..just had to comment on that too…anyways. carry on with the good work..
it's shweet man!

]]> By: Andrew http://www.ravensrants.com/runaway-part-twelve/comment-page-1/#comment-7201 Andrew Thu, 08 Jan 2004 20:41:32 +0000 http://ravensrants.com/?p=493#comment-7201 It's nice how he's finally taking charge of his life and standing up for something. The dynamic change in his lifestyle says a lot for his maturity and his character development. One side note thought, about halfway through, the entire thing changes to italics. It's nice how he's finally taking charge of his life and standing up for something. The dynamic change in his lifestyle says a lot for his maturity and his character development. One side note thought, about halfway through, the entire thing changes to italics.

]]> By: Lucky http://www.ravensrants.com/runaway-part-twelve/comment-page-1/#comment-7202 Lucky Fri, 02 Jan 2004 07:35:39 +0000 http://ravensrants.com/?p=493#comment-7202 Awsome story keep it comming love it Awsome story keep it comming love it

]]> By: FrozinVampyre http://www.ravensrants.com/runaway-part-twelve/comment-page-1/#comment-7203 FrozinVampyre Mon, 29 Dec 2003 07:05:08 +0000 http://ravensrants.com/?p=493#comment-7203 LOOVE IT KEEP EM' COMIN!!!!!1 LOOVE IT KEEP EM' COMIN!!!!!1

]]> By: Alysa http://www.ravensrants.com/runaway-part-twelve/comment-page-1/#comment-7204 Alysa Fri, 26 Dec 2003 00:49:11 +0000 http://ravensrants.com/?p=493#comment-7204 Hey there raven, Love this like always! Keep them comming! ttyl bye Hey there raven, Love this like always! Keep them comming! ttyl bye

]]> By: Anin http://www.ravensrants.com/runaway-part-twelve/comment-page-1/#comment-7205 Anin Tue, 23 Dec 2003 04:41:22 +0000 http://ravensrants.com/?p=493#comment-7205 i like it. very good. i like it. very good.

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