Comments on: Shadowline: Introduction

By: Erica

Erica — Mon, 26 Nov 2007 21:42:41 +0000

WOW! That was the most exrodinary story that i've ever read. You need to make another story just like it. i now worship you. You remind me of a young Stephen King. It was awesome. Keep on writing, Erica13387

By: Nicole

Nicole — Fri, 26 Oct 2007 21:25:38 +0000

i loved it a lot!!! keep it up.

By: Quitarias

Quitarias — Fri, 20 Apr 2007 19:40:12 +0000

Well writen but definetly lacks the certain spice on top.znot nearl as good as warlock or Runway.It kindof seemed rushed to me.
Anyways id like to tell you to put the same ammount of soul into this one as you did into the other stories ive read.
Its better than most of what ive read but not as good as i would expect from you.
Well i wish you better writing later on.

By: Kayla

Kayla — Sun, 07 Aug 2005 03:10:04 +0000

Very good, it kept me interested

By: Arachne

Arachne — Thu, 09 Jun 2005 23:48:57 +0000

Wow….I loved this story!! It kept me reading until the very end! Wonderful job!
~Arachne

By: hellflower

hellflower — Wed, 03 Nov 2004 03:25:16 +0000

Outstanding! I loved it!

By: Meg

Meg — Mon, 01 Nov 2004 23:15:22 +0000

Very Very good. I enjoyed it a lot. you have such a gift its wonderful of you to share it