Comments on: Summer Night

By: michael

michael — Sun, 09 Jul 2006 22:34:39 +0000

hello can i buy hotel 12 september 2006?i can sleep there 12 days.thank you.

By: katie

katie — Sat, 07 May 2005 04:48:32 +0000

this poem reminds me when i had a summer fling and i cry casue me and this guy still tlk lol

By: Taylor and Karina

Taylor and Karina — Mon, 17 Jan 2005 06:15:25 +0000

wow. you have been through a lot of heart breaks or you like a certain girl alot. it could just be a daydream or fantasy or just a random thought but wow. you are really good. we are soo looking foward into getting your book and hopefully meeting you! we LOVE your poems and keep on going
Love yours truly,
Taylor and Karina

By: Bones the Blue Skull

Bones the Blue Skull — Mon, 03 Jan 2005 00:01:47 +0000

your poem is truely inspirational…being in such a painful but beautiful place eases the soul..thank you.

By: clara labrier

clara labrier — Tue, 06 Jul 2004 06:42:57 +0000

shit man thiz iz like the bezt poem ever written!! i love it. i am going to by the bookz to thiz. hope you think the same.

By: Andrea

Andrea — Sat, 03 Jul 2004 16:33:30 +0000

As I was reading the comments, I thought I had already commented because someone chose to steal my name. hahaha.(joke) I was thinking “When did I get so smart as to say something like ‘painfully beautiful’?” Then I realized I’m not…haha… So here I am again saying, another great and touching poem. (I really need to expand my vocabulary, I’m going to go the dictionary now. hahaha)

By: myemeraldmind

myemeraldmind — Fri, 25 Jun 2004 20:51:09 +0000

“Slowly we found ourselves hanging to every word
like reading the last chapter slowly
just trying to postpone the end
Because when we run out of things to say
and goodbye can be said no more”

That part really got me, you are a wonderful poet Raven. Your gift gives everyone inspiration and hope. I thank you so much for shareing your talents with us we are lucky to read your poems.

By: Ti

Ti — Tue, 22 Jun 2004 23:08:44 +0000

unwanted memories brought back by reading this. it’s good but i can’t stand reading it makes me want to cry and i can’t have that, not again…

to cry is to know that you are alive so therfore my river of tears has run dry.sorry to tell you but a cold heart is a dead heart

By: Ausgirl

Ausgirl — Fri, 11 Jun 2004 10:55:54 +0000

hey this is such a beautiful poem. im using for an english assignment on the Gothic, but it touched me so deep. keep up the writing, its beautiful man.

By: Valkyrie December Mercy

Valkyrie December Mercy — Wed, 09 Jun 2004 01:29:06 +0000

You have done it again. I another empoweing piece of literature that i will remember and treasure. You are a very gifted writer. I hope what i write captures people as you have captured all that have read your poems.