http://www.ravensrants.com/the-carnie/ Gothic Poetry and More Sat, 05 Sep 2009 02:37:00 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0.1 http://www.ravensrants.com/the-carnie/comment-page-1/#comment-8099 Nickolai Thu, 25 Oct 2007 20:28:23 +0000 http://ravensrants.com/?p=522#comment-8099 nice once again raven. nice once again raven.

]]> http://www.ravensrants.com/the-carnie/comment-page-1/#comment-7407 brittany Thu, 05 Apr 2007 04:32:24 +0000 http://ravensrants.com/?p=522#comment-7407 I loved your story I think you are very smart and funy that was freaken hilarious. I loved your story I think you are very smart and funy that was freaken hilarious.

]]> http://www.ravensrants.com/the-carnie/comment-page-1/#comment-7408 Shrelanka Thu, 06 Oct 2005 12:28:30 +0000 http://ravensrants.com/?p=522#comment-7408 I know I'm horrible for mentioning this, but there is a mistake in there. You wrote, "hear" Instead of "bear" 3 lines from the bottom. Interesting story though. I know I'm horrible for mentioning this, but there is a mistake in there. You wrote, "hear" Instead of "bear" 3 lines from the bottom. Interesting story though.

]]> http://www.ravensrants.com/the-carnie/comment-page-1/#comment-7409 laura Mon, 11 Apr 2005 03:10:18 +0000 http://ravensrants.com/?p=522#comment-7409 I will always be the first to admit that I get a little carried away from time to time..I misunderstood the story..I was under the impression that it was a total non-fiction story and as a life time carny I took offence..So to all the people who reads this I do apologize. I would also like to add that not all carny's are bad..you just only here about the ones who make trouble..We are regular people no diffrent we just happen to travel for a living from town to town bringing joy to thousands of kids.. how can we that bad? So please remember this next time you visit a carnival.. were there for you.. I will always be the first to admit that I get a little carried away from time to time..I misunderstood the story..I was under the impression that it was a total non-fiction story and as a life time carny I took offence..So to all the people who reads this I do apologize. I would also like to add that not all carny's are bad..you just only here about the ones who make trouble..We are regular people no diffrent we just happen to travel for a living from town to town bringing joy to thousands of kids.. how can we that bad? So please remember this next time you visit a carnival.. were there for you..

]]> http://www.ravensrants.com/the-carnie/comment-page-1/#comment-7410 Laura Sat, 09 Apr 2005 22:02:24 +0000 http://ravensrants.com/?p=522#comment-7410 Let me first say.. the story was cute...BUT..ITS A LIE...I am a fourth generation carnie..thats right 4 generations of my family have been in the carnival now while I won't say that we do have games where the odds are against you they can all be won. And furthermore I have never had any one or seen anyone bend a dart.. and another thing Yes you do trade up your prizes in a ballon game but its a prize everytime.. everytime you pay 2 dollars... get 3 small trade up to medium..etc... But please next time you decide to write a story let it be known its ficticious I take great offence to being labled as a cheat...how about if I spread that you were a liar...wouldn't be nice would it.. Let me first say.. the story was cute…BUT..ITS A LIE…I am a fourth generation carnie..thats right 4 generations of my family have been in the carnival now while I won't say that we do have games where the odds are against you they can all be won. And furthermore I have never had any one or seen anyone bend a dart.. and another thing Yes you do trade up your prizes in a ballon game but its a prize everytime.. everytime you pay 2 dollars… get 3 small trade up to medium..etc… But please next time you decide to write a story let it be known its ficticious I take great offence to being labled as a cheat…how about if I spread that you were a liar…wouldn't be nice would it..

]]> http://www.ravensrants.com/the-carnie/comment-page-1/#comment-7411 Curious Pyro Wed, 10 Nov 2004 00:50:24 +0000 http://ravensrants.com/?p=522#comment-7411 it seems too good to be true, a person on this earth with enough power, ability, call it what you will, to trick even the most dread of all tricksters the carnies.. kudos my man, kudos it seems too good to be true, a person on this earth with enough power, ability, call it what you will, to trick even the most dread of all tricksters the carnies.. kudos my man, kudos

]]> http://www.ravensrants.com/the-carnie/comment-page-1/#comment-7412 Gustavo Wed, 26 May 2004 04:19:23 +0000 http://ravensrants.com/?p=522#comment-7412 HAHA.. HAHA..

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