http://www.ravensrants.com/the-dead-hypnotist-part-two/ Gothic Poetry and More Wed, 23 Jul 2008 18:03:23 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.5.1 http://www.ravensrants.com/the-dead-hypnotist-part-two/#comment-8112 Blake Fri, 02 Nov 2007 18:06:59 +0000 http://ravensrants.com/?p=550#comment-8112 I think your stories are filled with mystery and a sence that gathers the readers attention to where its almsot impossible not to read. Good job on all of your work and i hope more comes in! I think your stories are filled with mystery and a sence that gathers the readers attention to where its almsot impossible not to read. Good job on all of your work and i hope more comes in!

]]> http://www.ravensrants.com/the-dead-hypnotist-part-two/#comment-7600 danielle Sat, 02 Oct 2004 07:10:31 +0000 http://ravensrants.com/?p=550#comment-7600 hey..ive never commented on ne thing but i love your stories and poems..they are great..i cant wait to see what the new ones will be like! hey..ive never commented on ne thing but i love your stories and poems..they are great..i cant wait to see what the new ones will be like!

]]> http://www.ravensrants.com/the-dead-hypnotist-part-two/#comment-7601 Shadow Lander Thu, 24 Jun 2004 13:59:27 +0000 http://ravensrants.com/?p=550#comment-7601 well well...the plot thickens...in a way. i like the fact that he didn't go all soft on that man he was interveiwing. that was good. and nice description of tone when the characters say something..i really liked this bit. it didn't reveal much, but that only makes me want to read more..so it's a good thing..nice one.. well well…the plot thickens…in a way. i like the fact that he didn’t go all soft on that man he was interveiwing. that was good. and nice description of tone when the characters say something..i really liked this bit. it didn’t reveal much, but that only makes me want to read more..so it’s a good thing..nice one..

]]> http://www.ravensrants.com/the-dead-hypnotist-part-two/#comment-7602 Kami Mon, 26 Apr 2004 21:18:17 +0000 http://ravensrants.com/?p=550#comment-7602 Raven, you describe the emotions and actions of your characters so well. I can picture almost to the exact point everything that they are doing. Tony and April are so mysterious and it keeps you going, I cant stop reading your stories!! Raven, you describe the emotions and actions of your characters so well. I can picture almost to the exact point everything that they are doing. Tony and April are so mysterious and it keeps you going, I cant stop reading your stories!!

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