Comments on: The Party

By: Nickolai

Nickolai — Thu, 25 Oct 2007 20:11:05 +0000

it was a very good story raven. Ive recently gotten into your work and your very talented. Maybe sometimes you would like to discuss with me about some parts of the human mind? maybe some light poetry? anyways im a instant fan.
Signed, Your Friend Nickolai

By: samantha

samantha — Sun, 24 Sep 2006 03:28:46 +0000

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i wish that a boy would do something like that to me..

By: Tiffany

Tiffany — Mon, 27 Feb 2006 17:10:29 +0000

WOW! You are so great at this.

By: Cerberus

Cerberus — Tue, 15 Nov 2005 04:49:32 +0000

Great observations! i would have never noticed those things. And a great example of a saying i cant remeber…..anyway the saying means that in elemntry you may make a rival and years later, not recognize them until later, but by then you love them. Thats not exactly what happened here but the priniples the same. sorta…

By: slayer

slayer — Thu, 06 Oct 2005 04:01:55 +0000

the old rivalry unravels. in a wierd kind of way. i love this! sherlock holmes meets his match huh?

By: brooke ransom

brooke ransom — Wed, 20 Apr 2005 05:55:05 +0000

I love this story. It captured me instantly. You are so talented, Raven!

Brooke

By: REYMELYN

REYMELYN — Fri, 28 Jan 2005 06:39:59 +0000

This short story of yours was trully touching!I just hope that you guys must look on the inner beauty of a lady because that's what true love is!You must love her for who she is…not only on what you can see for now..!

By: kitty

kitty — Mon, 14 Jun 2004 05:02:38 +0000

i think true love comes togther in mysterious ways………

By: Kayla

Kayla — Thu, 27 May 2004 22:18:44 +0000

Very nice Raven. A sweet little story Is it true?

By: Eleanor

Eleanor — Tue, 10 Feb 2004 00:26:46 +0000

i liked it, she's sounded to familier for comfort though, to much like me. was a little i dunno empty, but thats just my need to find deep feeling and depth in everything so please ignore comments. very nice discription.