Sometimes I think of you
and wonder where you are
and if you think of me on lonely nights
or dream about me when there’s nothing left to dream
I don’t expect you to miss me
and I know the phone will never ring
with your voice hanging on the other line
but I have to know
if I’m in your thoughts
or if you forgot about me
like you promised you never would
I can’t bear the thought
of what we shared
being nothing than a footnote
in a forgotten chapter of your life
and even though I only think of you
during the loneliest hours of the night
Part of me is still hoping
that you’re thinking of me
when I’m busy not thinking of you
So shed not a tear for what we lost
nor heave a sigh for what could have been
Just let me grace your thoughts
when the night hangs long and low
and everything will be right when we awake
in the worlds we’ve created
in the many years we’ve been apart


Can it be true?… A first comment position? (even as I type this I bet it’s being stolen)
This poem was incredible. Tonight seems to be an excellent night for nostalgia for me. It’s a very meaningful and emotional poem, and as excellent as all the others…
This poem is so great! I love your work, but this one touched really close to home. its an incredible peice. i love it!
This is a really emotional piece of work. It’s kind of ironic too because tonight I was thinking about my ex and my thoughts were expressed perfectly in your poem. Good Job!!!
I Love It! You Are So Elegant with words….This hit me deep cuz i can relate… thanks for giving me something so see and enjoy much….
Dead Cold Kisses
Draped in
Blood…
-Zee
That was just beautiful mate, the way you tap directly into the emotions of being apart from someone you once loved…I have not the words to praise you enough.
beautiful, good work
i really liked your poem. it made me think of everything going on in my life
Memories of a love that didn’t have a bitter, hating end and that included you would never be closed off in a box in the mind…they’d be replayed over and over to be cherished forever…
I really like your poetry Raven, some are the best I have ever read however I didn’t like this one quite as much….Maybe I just didn’t feel the flow.
Keep writing the good stuff!
When space comes between two people, so many things fill this gap. Thoughts and fears of us having been being forgotten, memories we want to capture once again, so overwhelm us that we forget there is still tomorrow that we should look forward to.
Oh wow raven.. I am amazed… you always seem to capture my emotions and put them into words I love it… alot! I am in love with your words… thank you
Tip of the iceberg… Upon the state of my being.
This one hits really close to home especially since that’s the way I feel about my ex whom I’ve been thinking and dreaming about in the dead of the night. It’s awesome and I don’t think anyone could have done better.
For some reason, your poems always describe what I’m going through. You’re really talented, Raven, and I love the fact that you’re letting others see that. It’s inspired me more to do so as well. But this poem, it’s just something else…Beautiful, as always…
When I read this, I cried. It made me think of how much I miss Travis.
Oh my god, when I read this I wanted to cry. Reminds me so much of what I’m feeling for someone. I miss you Deoshread!
wow that totally discribes me and my boyfriend and our relationship!
WOW I LOVE THIS POEM. ITS YOUR BEST EVER CUZ SOMETIMES I FEEL THE SAME WAY ITS BEEN ONLY A COUPLE OF MONTHS THAT ME AND MY BOYFRIEND DEPARTED BUT I STILL MISS HIM BUT ALL IN ALL GREAT POEM ITS KIND OF LIKE ONE THAT IVE DONE BUT BUT YOURS IS MORE LONGER THAN MINE YEAH LOVE POEM. TIL NEXT TIME.
it’s beautiful. i absolutely love it.
ok… am i the only person in the WORLD that is not talking about my ex or my love or whatever? this poem is good for what it does: it makes you think. Just appreciate raven’s words for the message behind them, not “i’m so sad”.
One of my favorites, I love this poem. I feel this way lying in bed not just thinking about past lovers but also friends that touched my life and the people that are long gone. I wonder if they still think about me, just one good memory the way I remember them.
This poem hit me in the face.I just stumbled across this site by accident but wow. My girlfriend Dariko just left america to go home to turkmenistan and I’m left here wondering where she is now…
Really great man, Im new to the site and that was the first I read. It’s so perfect for whats going on in my life. I love the site already, its going straight to my fav’s
This poem is one of the best I’ve heard. Worth publishing I think. Keep up the good work!
I love this poem. This is the 1st i have read. This is my new all time fav site. This describes me and how im feeling now. Thankx i love this poem.
Thank you, for once again expressing my thoughts in a way I never could.
i got to half way and couldt stop crying…it was like every line wrote was about me and how i have been feeling… beautfull poem xx shaz xx
I just think it is sad that you lost the love of your life… I know how you feel and if I could put it into words… it would be just like you have… The feelings you have you feel them in your words…and in the thoughts you have talked about … Keep loving… and learning you are a strong man…
this poem described how i feel about those poeple that i let slip away and some aren’t like others but for the most part the few i loved i let go ,,, this poem expresse’s my feelings for the ones that i did truelly love with my heart
hey this poem REALLLY touched me alot cause i’v been going thought alot latly with my b/f or shal i say x b/f now..an this poem really made me think..like if he really does think about me or not..so i just that i’d tell you this is the bed poem out of your thing as far as i have read i’v only gotten throught the first
i only wish that the person i could say this to could actually hear me. i had a dream last nite and in that dream that person told me that they never loved me. i pray that that special person thinks of me and still loves me.
I have prided myself on being able to forget memories. And reading this has brought back one of the worst i’ve ever know, and the hardest one to forget. I don’t ever show my feelings, but i was close to tears upon reading this poem. At night, i woke up with tears streaming down my face and i had been dreaming about that poem and the memories it brought back. I don’t feel, but this poem made me feel. Congratulations, and even though it unearthed pain, i needed to read that poem. Thank you.
this poem reminds me of a special someone… i had tears running down my face when i read it… it’s a wonderful poem
Omg i love this poem so fuckin much, i can relate so much you dont even understand i just got to this site and once i layed my eyes on it i loved it.
Raven! this is an exellent poem. it is sad and touching and well written. I’m sorry that you lost your love. My brother lost his first and only true love for three years, recently i helped him track her down. They plan to get married this august.
i’ve taught myself over the years to block out all emotions in my head that make me more depressed, and that includes memories. this made memories come back into my head i usually wouldn’t have let. it’s brought back pain and suffering and i am admitting to weakness..but it has none-the-less made me think more about the situatuion i wanted to forget, so thank you, because maybe now i can see it in a more accepting way, and can once again block it out. (in other words, good poem =)
This poem made me think…It is hard thinking about someone for long periods of time, with lots of concern, wondering if you even so much as sneak into their minds. Its, in my opinion, depressing, because you only have that little ounce of hope in your heart of hearts that they’re thinking of you….great poem.
Another exellent poem, but this one depresses me. heh. It made me think of Val, and it made me miss her more so than I already do. :(…. But still an exellent poem.
i really like this poem it really touched me in so many ways and i hope it help other people like it did me…
I NEVER FORGOT YOU iv beenreading your stuff since 2 months ago i found you again by accident i…i still remember you:(
this poem reminds me of someone i wish i could forget
This poem is one of the best I have ever read…it touches the soul of a reader that has felt pain like that and makes you feel agin what you needed to feel.
I loved someone like that once and reading your poem reminds me of all the feeling that are left behind…
Elizabeth
i love this poem. i almost have the same situation. i write dark poetry a lot, but mostly about reasons to live, and how life is a knife, that just keeps stabbing and stabbing at you, until one day, you fall to the ground. but life will keep stabbing, until all the blood runs cold out of your limp body. so it comforted me to know, that im not the only one suffering from lost love.
vey good poem this discribes what i’ve been through with my girl lying, cheating and leaving me for another guy good poem
fading into the
shadows,
unknown
This poem kick’s ass.Its basicly all true.Its like if someone was telling my life.I also write poetry ….MOST PEOPLE THINK IM CRAZY “The truth is im not, I just seam to love death .I have a very especial dark side.I gues thats why most guys never seam to bother or call.This poetry tell’s you about someone that is lonely,or just got forgotten.And is still wondering if there rememberd.I love this poem and im wondering if i’am rememberd. BY VIVIAN
PS
LOVE U’R POEM
this poem helped me gather my hopes and dreams of the love that i lost and shattered them and i thank you for that.
thank you
lady
I just wanted to say that I think you’ve written a wonderfully passionate poem. It touched me. Thanks for sharing it.
PERFECT .. JUST PERFECT!!
that poem reminds me so much of how i think of a past relationship that still lingers in my thoughts. good to know u feel the same. thankyou raven for writing beautiful poetry.
this poem is beautiful yet it reminds me of a past relationship which just came to an end one week ago tomorrow. -sigh-
that is really good.
So beautiful. I just found your site and this is the first poem I clicked on, after reading all about you that is. I admire you.
Never stop.
Excellent poem. Funny that just last night, I ran across pictures of my lifetime love from 10 years ago and those pictures have now been accentuated by your words. This is my first time to your site and after reading now for the past hour, I am very impressed with your work. Thanks for sharing.
i love this poem it is so perfect keep up the good work pls this is the only web site that puts me in a good mood for the day i love it
O.M.G…. you r an amazing poet…. your poems r so deep!!!!
OH My God you so have a way with words this is the first time to your site……. your poems are so awsome keep up the good work
Very expressive good, my first visit to site having been recommended by a friend. It tells it all nostalgia abounds in autumn mists memmories drift on golden sun. Now is great love is great but other loves linger in your memories, you wonder do they in his too?
OOps sorry presses post three times - forgive I’m a newbie.:-)
i never thought in my life that another would capture my thoughts and put them into type…the sher thought of it is bewildering..you have writtin exactly what i wish i could say,but i have yet to find the balls to do so..you are very good by the way.
I Absolutley Love This Poem, Keep up the good work!
Beautiful poem. It reminds me of my lost love…
Beautiful, its like silent longing.
I think that this poem fits me well at times. I wounder the same about a guy that I was with for six months.He is still on my mind when I am lonely or wanting those comforting arms around me. Thank you for sharing your poem with everyone.
Excellent job these works of your are excellent as always.
This poem is so easy to relate to, it is amazing.
Raven, It has been awhile since i have posted comments to you about your poems so i thought that i would visit your site and see your latests works. I am still glad to see that you are writing poetry because it is one of the few things that takes my mind off of death when i am depressed. Also i enjoyed this poem quite well because i did not do my usual cutting this evening. Your work is a true masterpiece.
i love this poem .. it is dark but meaningful like… acid tears pouring down your cheeks silent but longing for love…
i loved this poem. i can really relate to it.
This peice of literature is great… You are a very talented man…Keep up the good work!
I love that poem simply because I know exactly how it feels. I wonder if the one I fell in love with is thinking about me at this moment.
This peom was beautifully written and has a dark edge to it. i really can relate to it because i wonder if the person i fell for was thinking of me too.
I loved that poem. Its amazing and it just made my eyes burn with tears. Gd stuff there….
this poem reminded me of my ex!…there are lonely nights that i long for him…that I wanted him bad and I need him to be at my side…but it’s too late that I realized that it was my damn fault ending it so soon.!!you Raven is an amazing writer!keep it!…I don’t want to cry now…!
This poem makes my heart ache because I always wonder if my love is thinking of me. But I know he,s not
This Poem was Great, It makes you think about a lot of stuff and is emotional and great for others!!!
Where are you now? Well, that question comes to mind alot, and hoefully yoa can get a feel of this poem.
Raven,
you are an excelent writer, ive read just about all your work, this is one of my favorite poems , i have to keep a long distence relationship and laying awake at night thinking about him..i can relate to this keep sharing your beautiful writing with us all Love Colleen
Wow. That’s all I can say. I am astounded at how gorgeous this poem is. Very kind and loving, even when their time together is long over. Amazing.
Dark Blessings,
Blood Stained Snow
I am not going to lie to you …. I wanted to cry , It still happens ; Where I wonder if one I have loved and trusted so deeply , if he still thinks of me or am I just ” That girl” who didn’t satisfy ?
I love this cause that is the exact way I feel and for someone to write this just helps me get closer to moving on I thank you so much for helping me
i read this poem and i loved it i broke up with someone that i truly fell in love with and now i have no idea what happened to him he moved away and i dont know where and this poem touches a very deep part of my heart
anyone who’s had a first love knows the memories will never leave, and that sometimes in the dead of night they will surface. for me, i know there’s someone that will haunt my thoughts for the rest of my life.. and i wonder where he is now..
love your work raven
This poem you wrote meens more to me then you will ever know. I just wanted to say thank you.
i just needed to express how i feel about this poem.. it reminds me of someone i love dearly, i am actually crying
that poem is amazing…it has reached right into me and reflects how i have been feeling over a loved one recently
this poem sounds like me and treys relationship!!!
I LOVE THIS ONE i still cant get over what a great writer you are.
wow. that was good. crazy but um its excatly how i feel right now- excatly. keep it up!
i cant believe it. you always manage to write the exact thing that im feeling …i actually cried while reading this one.’where are you now’ reminds me of the only person that mattered to me.thank you again
my friend moved a couple years ago and never said goodbye and this reminds me of her
Truly beautiful…Again, you have amazed me
I know how you feel. But do not linger on your past Laura. Look closely to the future and hold on to hope. Life gets tuffer…
Just had to give you credit for a great poem, it fits my recent situation perfectly.
Damn that was a strong poem. its just like my situation now. i know how it feels to been forgotten. ut this realy helped me to support me and i just love it.
That was a strong poem it hit me close to my heart b/c thats the way i feel about someone.
Keep them comeing raven.
Your poem reminded me of an ex-boyfriend that I have in Tenneesse. He still likes me and I still like him but things are becoming different between us, because of all the times that we went out. He broke up with me in the worst way ever. I forgave him and we went out again and then he cheated on me with one of my friends. Him still liking me isn’t helping with the pain that he put me through.
~Devils_little_Angel~
this poem is really beautiful it actually made me cry lol cuz it really speaks about how i feel
i hardly comment on poems i read but i just had to on this one
well bye
i was amazed with how much i could reflect on your poetry.
this poem i can reflect on lots at this time and your poetry is helping me get through alot of tough things at the moment
i dedicate this to and ex because i belive we were in love and i still do wonder if he still thinks of me and i know the fone will never ring with his voice on it so im hopin for fate to bring us back but i dont think it will cuz it hasent yet
I like you poem.Its so true about how others think about someone,and wonder if the person they are thinking about,is thinking about them.
You are a great writer,and I think that you will inspire alot of people soon enough.
I luv all of your poems I have read all of them I luv them so much but I can probably relate to this one the most I truely do luv it keep up the good work. ;]
I love this poem so much. I can relate to this poem because my boyfriend and I broke up in 2004. We go to the same school but we cant even seem to look in each others eyes in the hallway. I do sometimes wonder if he ever thinks of me and does he still love me. Your poem helped me get the power to go up to him one day and ask him whatever happend to use. Now we talk. I just wanted to say thanks, becuz if I wouldnt have ever read your poem me and him probably wouldnt ever have started talking again!1
i loved this poem so much. i wish you werent made to suffer so much….we’re alot alike…LOL!much peace…much pain
peace.
silently alone
that was so deep…. i <3ed it so much… itz so inspiring… makes me think thingz….
REALLY GREAT POEM, ITS SO TOUCHING AND SADDISH!!!
this one also got me thinking…. but its killing me to think that im fooling myself.
beautiful poem.
this reminds me so much about a guy i thought i was in love with but im here in north carolina and he lives in tennesse. i think about him sometimes and we w mail sometimes. but its not the same. i only knew him for a while but i really loved him. and i know that sounds stupid. it was really more of just a fling. but i guess everything isnt ment to last right? and i often wonder if he still thinks of me. i love you poetry. keep it up. i realte to a lot of it in some realy meaningful ways.
perfection.
this poem put down everything i am feeling right now….
amazing.
WOW!!! That is so touching! See my ex-bfs bff is my oldest friend and sometimes when im talkin to this friend he will bring up my ex and i am always wondering whether they talk about me….i hope so!!!
damn it reminded me of my life
That poem was amazing…i know you must hear this alot but it truley reminded me of my life i had once with this guy….:( it was so touching the first time i read it i nearly cried…i sometimes write my own poems…let it all out…even though im only a 15 yr old..:) your excellent.
i know everyone says this bt its true i can reali relate to this poem, about my ex this is exactly how i feel, you are an excelente poem writer!!!!
This poem is really good, it fits me right now b/c i just out of a relationship and i think about him all the time but i don’t think he thinks about me ever
wow….exactly wat i happen to thk about someone…good…i liked it alot
wow, it’s beautiful and i feel the same way, lost out there without nothing to cling onto.
It makes me miss my ex to read that… it describes how i feel so well…
Just when did you silently invade my soul? Your words mirror my life.
this poem speaks to me in so many ways, thank u for such a beautiful poem. LOVE AND PEACE ALWAYS JEANIE
ure poem is good , i feel so depressed now tho , i want girl with a real heart , i seem 2 be gettin bad luck with finding 1 tho , 07862789516
I REALLY LIKE THIS POEM….IT MADE ME THINK OF SOME1 AND….I REALLY MISS HIM BUT IT ALSO HELPED ME…
This poem really reminds me of a guy. I thought me and him had something but he acted like nothing when something special happened. He soon left and will be gone for a while. I always remember being with me and what happened that night. I love this poem anyways.
Hey,
I think that wasn’t your best work but, whom am i to blam well. How’ve you been, me im doing alright i guess i get to go to court today, but i did get my fat income tax return back, also i no longer work at pdc. i got a job at another glass factor in Leechburg maker 13.75 and hour just as a break out postion and having previous exp. im climbing up the pay checks. Well e-mail me at that account if i don’t go to jail. See you around love always…
Alex
HI ALL UR POEMS ARE SO GREAT MOST OF THEM I CAN RELATE TO IN A BIG WAY KEEP DOING WHAT YOU DO BEST…………